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A lot of people point out that it doesn't make any sense that Harry and Ron didn't like their schoolwork. Well I figured out why:

It's because the magic system is just as boring in-universe as out of universe. It doesn't make any sense in universe either. Harry and Ron realised Rowling's magic system kinda stinks way before we did, because they spent all day learning it.

If Sanderson had been writing Harry Potter, then Harry and Ron would have liked learning magic as much as Hermione did (Also, Sanderson actually DID write a book about a super-school, it's called Skyward, it's good)

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[-] southsamurai@sh.itjust.works 116 points 7 months ago

Eh, it's a good shower thought.

But I have to disagree overall. Both of them showed interest in various subjects; Harry more than Ron.

But, I think you're right that the magic system is boring. It's memorizing fiddly combinations of words and movements.

Rowling didn't really set out to write a magic series. She was writing a boarding school series with a magical background, so she never did any proper world building. What little there is came well after the movies exploded, and is largely cobbled together.

While not as well written, it has much closer ties to things like the Chronicle of Narnia than something like Sanderson's stuff. The magic is fluff, technobabble, not what the series is actually about.

If there had been sections set in muggle schools, Harry and Ron would have been roughly the same. Harry likely would have been interested in some subjects, but distracted by the real story, while Ron would have been kind of drifting along, getting by grade wise without being interested. Ron might have been semi into soccer, but have been whining about it not being as good as quiddich.

I would also argue that if Sanderson, or a similarly world building capable author, had taken on the story, there still would have been a gradation in the trio's academic focus. You take three kid characters and have them being exactly the same about something like that, it won't work; you'd end up having to completely hand wave it with references to them being great students because it's more boring to have them all be the same level of interest in any given thing.

Even among real world scholarly sorts, the levels of interest in a given subject aren't going to be exactly the same, and a lot of those kids tend to start their friendships because of the "nerd" factor. The HP trio became friends partially by accident, but stayed friends as they grew together and shared experiences, so the dynamics just aren't the same.

Even the last three books, where it seems like there's discovery of an underlying system to the magic, the deathly hallows are a mcguffin, not a genuine world building tool.

So, I get where you're coming from, and agree that she did a pretty crappy job of making a coherent magic system. But it didn't really need one, it just needed silly phrases for kids to geek out over, and that she did very well

[-] RichardDegenne@lemm.ee 34 points 7 months ago

Damn, you must take some pretty long showers!

[-] Muaddib@sopuli.xyz 13 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

In Sanderson's super school book, there are 10 kids and only one of them is uninterested in piloting spacefighters. But he is interested in engineering, so he's still able to be a big nerd about the book's subject matter. Everyone else is either a great pilot who likes piloting, or fucking dies in a tragic scheme emphasising the brutality and pointlessness of war.

Sanderson doesn't write characters who just drift along without an interest in anything, because Sanderson writes books about topics that he makes interesting.

Rowling is only able to create characters who think Divination or History of Magic are boring, because she makes them boring. Sometimes on purpose!

[-] JudahBenHur@lemm.ee 16 points 7 months ago

Rowling is a fucking idiot.

[-] TheresNodiee@lemm.ee 11 points 7 months ago

Rowling was writing about grade school kids going to school. Grade school kids get bored at school. If they live in a world where everyone uses magic and it's not that special they're going to get bored of learning about magic sometimes. It's like if in grade school our teachers spent a bunch of time teaching us how to use computers, phones, and other technological devices. Sometimes it would be cool and interesting and a lot of the time it would be pretty damn boring.

Plus Rowling wanted the grade school kids reading her books to relate to her characters, so she gave her characters a schooling experience they could relate to. And as much as I hate Rowling, there's something inherently kind of comedic about a bunch of kids being bored silly learning about magic because it's something that seems like it should be exciting to us, the reader.

The boredom of the characters isn't a failure of the writing or magic system, it works perfectly well for its intended effect.

[-] ohwhatfollyisman@lemmy.world 70 points 7 months ago

is this not just affirming the premise of the sixth book? that's the whole reason why Potter found the Prince's spells so fascinating. school subjects are not meant to entertain. they are meant to teach.

also, as book five attests--as well as does the subject of history of magic--some syllabi and some subjects were way more boring than others.

my main gripe would be that nobody taught english or any other form of formal communication at hogwarts. i dunno how they all just didn't end up speaking like Hagrid.

[-] Trainguyrom@reddthat.com 40 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

This is the one thing I really appreciated about the Discworld books on a recent re-read. The wizards are hilariously incapable of doing anything useful. Terry Pratchett doesn't give a super clear series of rules for the magic system but it's abundantly clear that the wizards are incapable of actually useful magic, and mostly just get too tired up in internal power struggles to ever do anything. And in the book Sourcery, the first sourcerer (one who can create new spells) to grace the disc takes over the world, realizes running the entire world is too stressful and tedious then creates his own pocket dimension to play with magic in instead (I'm oversimplifiing here, skipping over a bunch of interpersonal stuff related to a sentient wizard's staff run by a dead guy who tricked Death among other details but that's the general gist)

By making the wizards so useless it bypasses any of the logical problems posed by creating a world with magic in it. There's no "why no use this spell" "why not magic out of this problem" etc. all because the wizards are too useless to actually do anything

[-] philthi@lemmy.world 18 points 7 months ago

The wizards series of the discworld books are by far my favourite, but for exactly the reason you've set out. (Similarly with the witches)

The dialogue between the faculty is so believable and so stupifyingly inane and political that it's hard to say that anything is more probable.

Anyone actually interested in how magic works gets ignored and all that really matters is where the next good meal is coming from.

Just one of the countless reasons that Terry pratchett is a gem of an author.

[-] thedeadwalking4242@lemmy.world 14 points 7 months ago

One of the big ideas about magic in his universe isn’t just that the wizards are useless but that using magic is more trouble then it’s worth. It creates all sorts of left over magic residue that can build up to a myriad of effects.

We see the wizards preform powerful spells, showing that they can do have power and do have a certain degree of knowledge, but rather choose not to.

The duty of the wizards is more to make sure no one preforming magic willy nilly and to prevent people from making sorcerers.

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[-] Muaddib@sopuli.xyz 8 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

Rincewind isn't useless at most things, he's only useless at magic.

Esk is actually able to use magic to solve problems, because she's a precocious child and also female.

[-] tux@lemmy.world 4 points 7 months ago

I don’t know about that. They literally introduced time travel and then never bring it up again except for one sentence where “oh they all broke”.

Like don’t get me wrong it’s not horrible but it’s also not great. It is good enough for a kids story which is what it is, not something to build your life off of

[-] Trainguyrom@reddthat.com 5 points 7 months ago

I think you might have responded to the wrong comment?

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[-] andros_rex@lemmy.world 36 points 7 months ago

Stories don’t have to have “hard” magic systems to be good. I’m a big fan of the magical realism popular in Latin American fiction - where the magic is ambiguous and never quite explained at all.

The problem is the way that Rowling uses magic.

Rowling was clearly writing mystery novels, while lifting a lot of ideas for her setting from like The Worst Witch series. She uses magic spells like a Checkhov’s gun kind of thing, usually establishing whatever magical principle will save the day earlier in the novel. With a relatively self contained story, it works really well. Prisoner of Azkaban is one of her stronger books - the way that she sets up the mystery with the time turner as well as the stuff with Sirius Black, etc - because it’s very “clean” in this way. She introduces a bunch of new elements to her world, but they are all tied around supporting her story. This is good writing.

The problem is that Harry Potter books don’t work as an overarching story. It is abundantly clear that the Horcruxes and Deathly Hallows were not planned from the beginning. Rowling got to the last two books, realized that she needed to write some kind of ending, and then completely drove her plot off the rails.

You could say because she didn’t have an established magic system, it made it easier to drive off the rails, but really, it’s more that she’s competent at writing stand alone mystery novels (which really, that’s what books 1-4 are and they’re the best in the series for it) and not larger narratives. She doesn’t know how to convey the scope of a war, she doesn’t know how to tie together an Epic fantasy.

[-] WagyuSneakers@lemm.ee 5 points 7 months ago

It's abundantly clear the ending of book 1 wasn't even planned. Harry Potter doesn't even work when you look at each book individually. Even by YA standards.

[-] andros_rex@lemmy.world 14 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

I rank them 3>2>4>1>5>7(w/out epilogue)>6>7

I think the ending of the first book was planned, just clumsily executed. It’s a mystery novel - she places all of these red herrings/misdirection. The reveal that Snape was actually saying a counter course with the flying bludger incident is “cute” and goes with the muddled messages and themes she has around that character.

She knew where she wanted to get to, it’s just one of the more “Idiot Ball” driven plots of the series (along with the fifth book). Harry does stupid impulsive shit because that’s his character, and the world just has to react to it. Harry logic isn’t normal people logic, so by the end of the story we’ve kinda lost track of the plot.

It’s no Earthsea but it’s serviceable paperback detective fiction for children.

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[-] phx@lemmy.ca 3 points 7 months ago

Yeah, hard magic is not necessary. It's like "fit living and exercise" is conceptually easy, but the majority of people aren't really that fit and certainly not Olympic level athletes etc.

Magic could be a combination of luck, genetics, and ability to stick to it and study. THOSE can be hard for a lot of people in practice, but in concept easy at a lot of levels.

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[-] TheresNodiee@lemm.ee 31 points 7 months ago

There's nothing wrong with the magic system because there's always a reasonable setup and payoff for what can be done with magic and solutions never come out of nowhere as some deus ex machina. The magic system the stories had worked perfectly fine for the stories that were being told. Not every magic system has to be some stupid overly explained BS that takes all of the actual wonder and "magic" out of it.

Rowling is a piece of shit terf but you Sanderson cultists are still so fucking annoying. There's more to magic in storytelling than just the exact, specific mechanics of how it works. Read Earthsea.

[-] kuberoot@discuss.tchncs.de 14 points 7 months ago

I'm sorry, no Deus ex machina? Am I misremembering the bit where suddenly two wizards casting a spell at each other at the same time for a prolonged duration reverses cause and effect and makes dead people come back as ghosts to give the protagonist advice?

I can agree that stories don't need a "good" magic system, but I also feel like HP has glaring holes in places that negatively affect the experience. It's still a fun story, but I definitely think it could be better if the magic made more sense.

[-] boonhet@lemm.ee 5 points 7 months ago

One of the two wizards WAS the protagonist, so you might as well call this a near death experience or something. Might literally have all been in his head. I don't think this is a good example.

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[-] madjo@feddit.nl 6 points 7 months ago

Expecto patronum, et voila, deus ex machina.

[-] TheresNodiee@lemm.ee 5 points 7 months ago

They set it up at the beginning of the movie? How is that a deus ex machina?

[-] drunkpostdisaster@lemmy.world 4 points 7 months ago

She introduces time travel out of freaking nowhere.

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[-] jballs@sh.itjust.works 27 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

I love Brandon Sanderson, but his world building and complex magic systems aren't for most people. I've tried to get my wife to read his stuff for years and she just has never gotten into it.

The reason Harry Potter was so commercially successful is because the vast majority of the public doesn't want to learn about allomantic properties of 16 different metals and how they have internal/external, physical/mental, enhancement/temporal and pushing/pulling effects.

They don't want to learn about adhesion, gravitation, division, abrasion, progression, illumination, transformation, cohesion, and tension surges - and how bonding a spren through oathes increases your ability to surgebind. Their eyes glaze over when talking about the cognitive and physical realms.

Most people just want to hear "yeah some people are magic and can wave wands, say some magic words and poof magic happens." That's why it's one of the highest-grossing media franchises of all time.

But yeah, I've just learned to accept that while I love some Sanderson magic systems, it's not ever gonna be for everyone. And that's ok.

[-] Corkyskog@sh.itjust.works 4 points 7 months ago

Not only that, he struggles with any kind of romantic relationship writing. My wife also tried to read mistborn but kind of lost her shit when the only thing described was a short kiss across all that time.

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[-] drunkpostdisaster@lemmy.world 26 points 7 months ago

It says a lot about Rowling that Hermionesl's one flaw was being an abolitionist

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[-] ms_lane@lemmy.world 20 points 7 months ago

NECROMANCY!?

I'm a member of the College of Winterhold, In good stead.

[-] madjo@feddit.nl 4 points 7 months ago

No, not necromancy, we like to call it post mortem communication

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[-] Lightor@lemmy.world 18 points 7 months ago

My issue is honestly just the inconsistency of when spells would work or wouldn't. That and the fact that many dangerous situations could have been ended immediately if they used a spell they knew. I watched the movies and was yelling at the screen to use a certain spell to solve the situation but they just run away scared and helpless.

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[-] rumba@lemmy.zip 16 points 7 months ago

She made Hermione after herself. She needed the boys to be bad at magic or Hermione couldn't save them. If they were bad because magic was that hard, that would make her a genius, which wasn't what she was going for. The magical system was lame and the boys were bad at it because they were just unobservant undriven "boys". It's likely a combination of her worldview she's painting and trying to set the stage that magic is everywhere and all around us and everybody can do it but they don't just know exactly how.

[-] Muaddib@sopuli.xyz 6 points 7 months ago

Magic is that hard, but being a genius doesn't make you good at it. Rote memorisation makes you good at it. Hermione isn't a genius, she enjoys rote learning. Harry and Ron crave stimulation, and there's none to be found in Rowling's magic system. Rowling might have intended magic to be easy, but she made a mistake. Rowling enjoys rote memorisation, so it's easy for her and her self insert, but not for normal people who want to be intellectually stimulated. Rowling accidentally made magic hard, and the story makes more sense with her mistake in it.

[-] krakenfury@lemmy.sdf.org 5 points 7 months ago

Harry doesn't need to study or practice because, by accident of birth and circumstance, he's naturally gifted at magic. Hermione isn't naturally as gifted, but with hard work and dedication, she can do it all. Ron is neither, so he's just the fuck up.

[-] Vinny_93@lemmy.world 15 points 7 months ago

I'm currently going though the books and from what I can tell, Harry especially takes issues with some teachers. He hates history and doesn't understand divination but he's fine with charms, defense against the dark arts and even potions once Snape no longer teaches it.

It's just that during the lessons she describes, they usually have stuff like Quidditch or Voldemort stuff going on so they don't really pay attention. They also don't like doing homework so they let Hermione do it for them. And they still did pretty well on the OWLs so all in all, I think they were fine with class but by and large, she just doesn't really write about classes that went their regular course.

[-] atomicorange@lemmy.world 15 points 7 months ago

Just like all the worst real-world school subjects, her magic system isn’t something with a logic you can learn to understand, it’s something arbitrary you have to memorize. These poor kids are out here taking the equivalent of anatomy classes all day (why is that bone called the tibia? Don’t worry about it, just memorize it).

[-] HawlSera@lemm.ee 13 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

It's literally just memorizing bad latin, of course they were bored. There was no spiritual aspect to it at all

Edit: And don't think I forgot the time JK Rowling assumed a word meant "Friendly to thieves" because it was of African Origin when it actually meant "The Color Red in a spiritual context.", racist assclown

[-] tetris11@lemmy.ml 12 points 7 months ago

I think magic went through a dark age in the HP universe, where all the words that were imbued with power were done so aeons ago, and then that knowledge of how they came to be was lost, with only a few handful having been rediscovered in the modern era.

Exceptions like "Point me" might just be english analogs of existing spells, rather than new inventions.

[-] TheBat@lemmy.world 9 points 7 months ago

Or they're just lazy? 🤔

[-] illi@lemm.ee 10 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

Not any more than your average school kid I'd say. There are many subjects that are or can be interesting that are thought in schools, but can be taught in the most boring way. They enjoyed DADA with Lupin quite much for example.

There are also other subjects not related to practicing magic directly.

[-] Muaddib@sopuli.xyz 5 points 7 months ago

Yeah, book 3 is the one where Rowling made an effort to delve into the workings of the magic system. The Patronus is the only spell we actually learn how to cast. (No, levio-sah doesn't count). The time turner has limitations which allow Rowling to tell an interesting story with it.

Rowling made magic interesting for one book, and Harry became interested in magic.

Then she changed her mind.

[-] drunkpostdisaster@lemmy.world 8 points 7 months ago

It's also not surprising the conservative rat hates history even though it should be one of the most important subject when dealing with the setting's hitler.

[-] higgsboson@dubvee.org 5 points 7 months ago

I mean, it isnt quite juvenile fiction, but it's a series of books about kids. Having the magic system being simple makes sense.

[-] Muaddib@sopuli.xyz 4 points 7 months ago

Harry Potter's magic system isn't simple.

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[-] prole 4 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

I like how Patrick Rothfuss wrote about "magic" in his Kingkiller Chronicle... I think it was explicitly called something else (been years since I read the books), but it was pretty fucking cool.

It was like daoist in nature almost, if I remember correctly.

[-] Apeman42@lemmy.world 6 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

That guy had at least three magic systems going at once. It was a lot.

There was sympathy, which was kind of like voodoo dolls and also sometimes casting from hit points? Sygildry or something which was programming with magic runes. And Naming, which I believe was like grokking something so well you could just command it to do whatever.

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[-] Corkyskog@sh.itjust.works 4 points 7 months ago

Magic systems are not about what is possible, but the limitations.

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