the lighter chapter 02 is finally done, Essence_of_Meh sorry for being late by a month 😅 (thelighter.thecomicseries.com)

submitted 2 weeks ago* (last edited 2 weeks ago) by gog@lemmy.world to c/manga@ani.social

4 comments fedilink hide all child comments

top 4 comments

sorted by: hot top controversial new old

[-] Essence_of_Meh@lemmy.world 2 points 2 weeks ago

You remembered! The plot thickens, hooks are being placed, backstory breadcrumbs are slowly revealed - I like it. I'm still surprised I enjoy the sketchy art style as much as I do, it works well here.

Not sure if these are intentional or not so just in case:

Page 19, bottom right panel - is it suppose to be "Lutnent" (stylised speech/name) or is it typo for lieutenant?
Page 27, bottom right panel - I think you missed "you" in "are (you) out of (...)".

Again, really interesting chapter. Can't wait for more!

[-] gog@lemmy.world 2 points 2 weeks ago

Thanks so much, I updated the chapters

[-] ludrol@bookwyr.me 2 points 2 weeks ago* (last edited 2 weeks ago)

Nice! Your art got better and more consistent. one nit-pick would be that on bottom panel of page 12 I would put some background. a tent or some mountains would fill up the blank space and better place the characters in the camp.

Kneecap scene has induced in me various emotions. So good job doing that.

I don't know why I had hard time keeping up with the story. Maybe I was reading right to left, maybe there was too many characters or just my attention span was too short. Probably just a skill issue on my part.

[-] gog@lemmy.world 2 points 2 weeks ago

Woww, it's left to right

this post was submitted on 09 May 2026

13 points (100.0% liked)

Manga

1478 readers

23 users here now

This community is for discussions related to manga.

Rules

Posts must relate to manga or similar (manhwa, etc.).
Obey the ani.social Terms of Use.
In general, keep things civil and avoid attacking other individuals.
Make sure to tag spoilers where appropriate. See here for details.
Memes should be redirected toward a different, more appropriate community and will be removed. Same with hentai.
Posting rehosted versions of official releases is not allowed. Either post the official release if it is publicly available or post a scanlated release.

Post Tags

Post tags are optional, but are recommended since some frontends can use them to categorize posts. Some recommended post tags:

[Discussion], [DISC], [Chapter] - chapter discussion threads
[Art] - Official art from a series or author, OC fan-art is also allowed
[News] - news updates about series, authors, publishers, etc.
[Rec] - Recommendation posts are posts in which you recommend a series to others. Please provide a short review and information about the series as well.
[Spoiler] for discussions with spoilery content - indicate the series that is being spoiled

Related communities

!anime@ani.social
!lightnovels@ani.social
!visualnovels@ani.social
!otomegames@ani.social
!isekai@ani.social
Megathread of other communities on the fediverse maintained by @MentalEdge@sopuli.xyz

founded 2 years ago

MODERATORS

PrincessKadath@ani.social

Essence_of_Meh@lemmy.world

Essence_of_Meh@ani.social