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I tried putting the story in the body of the post a few times but it hangs forever when submitting, I think there may be a character processing limit. Trying it this way to see if I can post it in the comments instead.

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[-] strudel6242@beehaw.org 3 points 1 year ago

I like it. Only thing I would change is ending it at "I looked at you and felt a familiar cold. I thought you should know.”

How long have you been writing for? What inspired you to write this?

[-] nomad@beehaw.org 3 points 1 year ago

I've only been a casual writer on and of for a few years, when I decided it would be fun to use as a creative outlet. I like to find a scenario or setting that would creep me out and build a narrative around it that hasn't (hopefully) been done a million times. This one was my take on a ghost story without the usual stuff like haunted houses, poltergeists, possession, etc., and was my first story getting started.

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