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this post was submitted on 28 Jun 2026
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I finished it. Thank you for the read! It was blisteringly dark. Fantastic world building done from the limited frame of reference of Lukas. The philosophical aspects were done well, I quite appreciated that and Lukas's constant philosophical introspections. 78 was an enigma through and through, about as alien to me as to Lukas. Curious to know where he ends up, though I imagine from that point on he stops resisting and just lives as 78's dog. Grim and dark and terrible and morbid in every possible way.
Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really love how much your prompt inspired me to write and to get out of my own comfort zone (I do like horror, but I usually shy away from the super dark and gory stuff). I'm looking forward to doing more prompts here on Lemmy after a bit of a break from this one :)