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submitted 2 years ago by Kaladin_Stormblessed to c/writing@beehaw.org

(I haven't seen any writing prompts on here so far, so I figured I'd write the first one!)

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[-] dynamism@beehaw.org 1 points 2 years ago

Gah, this is so good! This paragraph in particular was so well paced.

“If you tell me to stay, I will” Kurt said to me. My knees nearly buckled. This shit doesn’t happen in real life. My heart was now pounding. I wanted nothing more to say yes pull him into my apartment and have a life with him. I wanted to adopt kids with him, watch him mow the lawn. Curl up with him in bed at night. Have coffee in the morning.

this post was submitted on 16 Jun 2023
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