I liked that it wasn't a parody of itself. Most of the writing could have been unchanged if it hadn't been anthro themed. And the writing was nice, nothing ham-fisted, and had some respect for the reader. I keep running into games where you've just talked to an NPC about how they need you to hit the blue button, and you've gone through a hallway of posters saying your goal is to hit the blue button, had a quest marker guiding you there that says 'this way to the blue button you need to press,' and your character still feels the need to speak to the air about the need to hit the blue button when you walk into the blue button room.