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Trying my hand at poetry
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this post was submitted on 22 Sep 2023
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I like your style, but this kinda sounds like a rape situation to me? Is that where you were going?
I mean, the guy ate her out twice, so good she forgot her own name. Not sure why the neighbors should care though.
If she’s screaming his name all night…
She was screaming his name.
Where did you get that?
I think "he had her" sounds non-consensual to me. Not a native speaker though. Like "he had his way with her" so bad that she forgot her name due to trauma and the neighbors ignore the drama.
Judging from the rest of the comments, i misread a wonderful adventure of attraction ¯\_(ツ)_/¯