I'm currently reading <Flung into a New World? Time to Lift the 200-Year Curse!> and it has the worst writing style I've ever had misfortune to stumble across. around 90% is written in inner monologue. Let me give you an example of how a typical paragraph would look like:

Well, I have to write a MidWeek post but I'm drawing blanks. What? I've switched to an every-other-week schedule? Yes, that's true but I hope people don't think that I'm lazy. What? You won't? That's nice but I just thought of a question and throw in a bonus post out of schedule to keep you all on your toes. Yes, that's really mean of me. Hey, why are you all leaving. No stop, you're mean now. Well, here is poor me all alone talking into the void again. Oh woe is me. What's that? There is still someone here. Well, welcome. Hope you have great time. What? You don't like my bonus Midweek post? Too bad, I won't remove it! Serves you right!

This is around 85-90% of the entire book. And If you think I was exaggerating:

It's the entire thing in this manner. This is not a cherry picked page but just the random page I was currently on. It's insane.