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[-] just_another_person@lemmy.world 3 points 8 months ago

Just a writing tip: separate your points into distinct sections.

Your point makes sense, but reads better when broken up into distinct paragraphs or thoughts.

[-] Kecessa@sh.itjust.works 7 points 8 months ago

It's already separated into two paragraphs, separating both points I'm making.

[-] just_another_person@lemmy.world 1 points 8 months ago

Certainly is after your edits. Thanks.

[-] Kecessa@sh.itjust.works 1 points 8 months ago* (last edited 8 months ago)

...

I didn't split it in two as an edit, it was split from the get go...

Edit: I looked again and the only difference is that I added "proportionally"

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