Excerpt:
Chapter 2:
The Same Method, The Same Result
“What if you could do it…?”
“I don’t know. Even if I do, this isn't the place for me anymore.”
“Why do you say that?”
“I don’t feel comfortable here, or anywhere, really. But perhaps in another place, away from people…”
“But we’ve been here for a while now…”
“Yes, but I feel people’s stares. Even with everything that’s happened, their mindset hasn’t changed.”
“Hmm. So, where would you like to go then?”
“Maybe a forest or a mountain. I’m not sure. A log cabin, living peacefully.”
“Sounds like a good plan, but wouldn’t you be awfully alone?”
“I wouldn’t mind. I’m already used to it.”
“And, what if I came with you?”
“Heh, I couldn't do that to you. You have your own plans.”
“Well, it’s not like that’s changed, but once we’re done with this, then…”
“But I don’t know how good of company I can be…”
“It’s my choice. You’re going to give me that much, aren't you?”
“Of course, b-but—”
“No 'buts' allowed, unless… you don’t want me to—?”
“I didn’t say that.”
“Then it’s settled.”
“Hmm, very well. But let it be known that I warned you.”
“Oh, how could I regret it? Don't be silly…”
It’s…
What…
She…
Wan…
The words fall silent; they’ve moved away. There’s something more, something that—
Thud! Thud! Thud!
Aiden wakes up. Someone is knocking at the door.
He stands up to answer, but stumbles slightly against the walls on the way.
“Who is it? Talia? What’s going on?” he yawns. “What do you want?”
“Sorry for waking you, but I discovered something. Wait, are you wearing the same clothes as yesterday?”
“What?” He quickly checks himself. “I-I suppose so, but that doesn’t matter. What did you find out?”
“Come on, let’s go. I’ll tell you on the way.”
“Alright, just let me wash my face first.”
“But—”
Aiden closes the door without warning.
I must have another shirt around here. Yeah, this will do.
The light from outside barely filters through the window; they are well covered. There’s not much difference in the atmosphere compared to last night.
It's 7 in the morning. The cold still lingers.
Aiden drinks some water, pats his face a few times, and gets ready to leave.
He opens the door slowly. Talia is leaning against the doorframe with one arm.
“You know, I worry about you. You won’t get a girlfriend like this.”
“Who are you, my mother?” he says as he closes the door behind him.
“I could be, but only if the little boy behaves,” she says, patting him on the back.
“Yeah, well, no thanks.”
“Why? It’s a good opportunity. A younger, prettier mother than yours is hard to ignore,” she says while following Aiden.
“I don’t think my ears can take it. Let’s just go.”
Aiden leads the way. They both reach the basement entrance in a couple of seconds.
“Wait, I haven’t told you what I found yet. Why are we going to the basement?”
“What, doesn’t it have something to do with the prisoner?”
“Well, yes, but—”
“Then let's not waste any time,” he says as he opens the door.
“W-wait—”
They both go down the stairs, but Talia stops him once they reach the bottom.
“W-wait for me. I need to tell you what I discovered first.”
“And? What is it?”
“Well, he told me that Varos and the rest of his men… work with several Aberrants, and not just work with them—he gives them the orders…”
“And…?”
“And? What do you mean, ‘And?’”
“Well, that's it.”
“And you think that’s not a big deal?”
“No, but I already knew.”
“Knew what?”
“That they work with those beasts.”
“And you didn’t tell me?!”
“Shhh, don’t yell.”
“Oops, sorry, but why didn’t you tell me?”
“You didn’t ask.”
“Oh, I know, but…” She runs her hands over her face. “Ugh, I can’t with you.”
“Well, is that all?”
“Yes, but if you already knew, why are we going to see him?”
“There’s something else I want to ask him, taking advantage of the fact that he’s cooperative thanks to the food you gave him.”
“How do you know I brought him food?”
“I don’t have to explain everything, do I? Come on, let’s go,” he says, patting her on the back and setting off again.
“But…”
She is left with the word in her mouth as Aiden walks away toward the cell.
“Looks like he hasn’t tried anything dangerous. Good for him.”
Thud!
Talia bumps his shoulder slightly when she catches up.
“Stay back, just in case.”
With the metallic click of the key unlocking the door, Aiden enters the room, finding the prisoner.
There is a small window in the room, through which the dim light from outside enters—enough space to illuminate the place, but not enough to escape.
In the back, the prisoner is lying on the floor, his back to the door. There is a tray with remnants of food beside him.
“Your name is ‘Aiden,’ right? I remember it well now. He told me about you.”
“Did he? And what did he say?”
“He said you were ruthless, that you don’t mind hurting others as long as you get what you want…” He stands up and turns to look at both of them. “…and that we shouldn't let ourselves be captured alive by you…”
“Sounds more like spite than a real warning to me.”
“Cut the nonsense. If you came to finish me off, I won’t go down without a fight,” he says, getting into a fighting stance.
“Tell me, do you know her?”
“Her? I have no idea who she is.”
Aiden just takes a few steps forward, opening his palms and showing them to the man.
“Look, I know we got off on the wrong foot, but I’m not going to kill you, and I don't want to fight either,” he points behind his back, indicating he isn't carrying his sword.
“Then what do you want?”
“I just need answers—answers I know you have. And if you help me, we’ll let you go peacefully, just without the drugs you were carrying.”
The prisoner lowers his guard for a moment, thinking about the words he just heard.
“Look, I’ve been here for hours bracing myself for a fight for my life. So, I propose something.”
“I’m listening.”
“We fight. If you manage to knock me down until I can’t get up, I’ll tell you everything you want to know. But if I manage to land a single blow that moves you or hurts you, you’ll let me go, with my drugs, of course.”
“Deal. Though I didn’t think you’d have so little faith in yourself.”
“Look, kid, I’m just being realistic. I’ve been told what you’re capable of, so I can only make it fair considering the circumstances.”
“Alright, you’ll tell me everything without reservations once we're done,” Aiden says, stretching his neck slightly.
“As you wish.”
The prisoner takes a combat stance, but Aiden remains relaxed; he doesn’t raise his arms or spread his legs.
Talia steps into the cell, moving aside into a corner.
“Alright, let’s begin!”
The prisoner lunges with strength and speed.
He aims for the head, and—
THUD!
A powerful blow connects with Aiden's face.
He barely moved…
He slowly pulls back his hand.
“You’re going to have to try a little harder if you want to hurt me.”
“But I—”
“I didn’t move, did I?”
“Fair enough.”
Once more.
Fhh! Fhh! Fhh!
Fhh! Fhh!
The blows only cut the air.
Aiden dodges easily, as if they were in slow motion.
Fhh! Fhh! Fhh!
The prisoner doesn’t retreat; he doesn’t stop attacking.
Thud! Thud!
Aiden stops dodging and begins to parry the blows with his hands, without much difficulty.
Thud! Thud! Thud!
This time—
THUD!
He stops one of the blows with the palm of his hand.
“Kgh!”
Talia watches, leaning against the wall.
“Heh, that’s it.”
The impact was as hard as hitting a wall, making him recoil for a moment.
A sharp pain shoots through his knuckles.
“What the hell are you made of?”
“What’s wrong? Is that all you’ve got?”
“You bastard! Of course not!”
Thud! Thud! Thud!
Aiden continues to deflect the attacks with ease.
“I’m starting to get bored.”
Thh!
This time, he stops one of the blows completely.
I need to rattle him.
SMACK!
Aiden replies with a slap that leaves the prisoner stunned.
“M-merda. I’m going to—!”
Without even finishing his sentence, the man rushes forward in a fury, determined to land a blow with everything he has.
Good, this should be enough.
THUD!
“...!”
A direct hit to the chest.
What?
That felt different, strange…
I have to end it!
Aiden deflects all the force of the next attack and—
THUD!
Using the palm of his hand, he strikes and pushes the prisoner with colossal force, sending him flying to the other side of the room.
“Wow, I didn’t think you wanted to finish him off that fast,” Talia comments. “Or did that last hit actually hurt you?”
“Of course not, it’s just that—”
“...?!”
My mouth tastes like metal. What is—?!
“A-Aiden, y-you are, you have blood on…” she points to Aiden’s face with her hand.
“What…?”
My lips feel wet. What’s going on?
Aiden touches his lips with his fingertips.
“...!”
They are stained with blood.
Shit—
“Cough! Cough!”
Aiden coughs, covering his mouth with his palm, completely staining it with blood.
“Aiden! What’s wrong with you?!”
He continues coughing, this time not covering himself.
The floor is stained red.
Something is wrong, it must be—!
Talia quickly approaches Aiden, places her hand on his back, and rubs it to try and calm him.
“Khhg…”
“Come on, come on, it’s over. You’re alright now.”
He gasps as he tries to catch his breath. “Yes, I’m done. It’s nothing…”
Talia takes a big breath of relief upon hearing him speak.
“Oh, hey, don’t scare me like that! What happened to you? Don’t tell me he actually hurt you.”
“...?” He looks toward the back of the room; the prisoner is unconscious. “Heh, so that’s why he was quiet.”
“Hey! Talk to me!” She shakes Aiden slightly to get his attention.
“No, it wasn't him. His punch was strong, but not enough to do this to me.”
“Then what was it?”
“I was…,” he spits a little blood on the floor and clears his throat. “I was ambushed when I was outside. I couldn’t stop them. I took a lot of punishment.”
“But wasn’t that days ago?”
“Yes, but I guess I hadn’t fully recovered, and that blow reopened the wounds.”
“But, damn it, if you’re coughing up blood, you might have a damaged lung! You need to rest!”
“I know, I know. I’m not much use like this, and the prisoner is going to be unconscious for a while.”
“Well, come on, I’ll help you—”
“I’m not that bad. It was nothing. I can walk alone.”
“But—”
“I can. Let’s go.”
Aiden walks ahead, not giving her time to decide.
“W-wait! Where are you going?”
He stops for a moment.
“I’m going to see the doctor,” he says, then continues on his way.
Talia stays behind, takes one last look inside the cell, then locks it securely.
It's 8 in the morning. People are already leaving their homes, heading to the communal areas for breakfast. Stores are beginning to open, and others are on their way to replace the watch shift.
Sunlight begins to bathe the buildings and filter through the city's narrowest passages. The darkness is over, for now. There are still a few hours to breathe.
In a small house, the doors are not yet open to the public…
“You say it was spontaneous?”
“Yes, though it stopped after a few seconds.”
“Tell me, have you received any blows or injuries recently?”
“Nothing today or yesterday, but two days ago I was ambushed by some Conformes. I took quite a few hits, but nothing serious, beyond…”
“Beyond what?”
“Beyond being forcefully thrown against the wall of a wooden house. It completely broke behind me. It took me a few seconds to catch my breath, and when I could, my chest hurt when I breathed.”
“Hmm, anything else?”
“I bled from the mouth after taking a couple of punches to the stomach, but I thought the bleeding was from those same punches, so I ignored it…”
“Then that explains the hemorrhage.”
“It does? So, what do I have?”
“The blows you received caused an internal hemorrhage—an accumulation of blood between the lung and the chest wall. The condition is ‘Traumatic Hemothorax.’ Your, let's call it, regenerative capacity, managed to stop the active bleeding, but a large amount of blood remained trapped in your thoracic cavity.”
“So, that explains the darker color of the blood, and the amount, but why haven't I healed yet?”
“Look, only you know the degree and speed at which your wounds heal. I know they do so much faster than the average human, but considering I can barely hear your breathing, I’d say it hasn’t healed completely yet.”
“That’s what I don’t understand.”
“Based on what you've told me, your wound should have healed by now, but it hasn't. And I don't think the blow you took recently would have damaged you again. Therefore—and I’d be taking a guess—it's as if something is preventing you from healing.”
“But the other superficial wounds have healed.”
“Yes, and that’s where my doubt comes from. Whatever is stopping you from healing knows where to target to truly affect you. But for now, we gain nothing from guessing games. Here, take one of these now for the pain, and this other one later, to rule out a parasite. But the one thing you absolutely must do is rest.”
“I know. I understand, but—”
“Aiden, I know what you’re doing is important, and maybe I don’t understand half of your strengths, but I do know that if you keep forcing your body like this, it will fail you when you need it most. Your body and your mind are one, remember that.”
“Alright. Thank you, Doctor.”
He walks calmly toward the door and closes it behind him once he is outside the doctor's house.
So, I just need to rest. Maybe a few hours will be enough.
It’s almost 9 o’clock. Aiden stands in front of his room door.
With the creak of the wood, he opens the door. He is greeted by a cold, dark room where barely any light enters. It hasn’t changed. No matter how much time passes, it feels familiar, one way or another.
There is a plate on the nightstand—two sandwiches—along with a note: “I’ll bring you lunch when it’s time. Rest. And if I find out you’re not in bed, I’m stealing your sword and selling it by the pound,” a smiley face at the bottom of the...
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